Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV
programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Civilizations is one of the major elements, that is influenced by international movie industries. While some people believe that utilizing external pictures in domestic culture may have some undesired consequences, another group thinks that the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.
One of the mains reasons, that international pictures is considered to be benefical in a mankind’s lifestyle; is that it helps people to become more familiar with different cultures, and this familiarity encourage people to use the most productive ones in their life or even in their career; for example, I have an Australian Architect friend who had travelled to Egypyt, and through his exploration in a historical monument has noticed a rare ancient method, that Egyptians had been used that in ancient times. Consequently, he started using this method in his own country, and become one of the most influential experts in his career.
On the negative side of this view, this phenomenon could have some drawbacks on society’s susceptible groups like kids. Obviously, language is one of the of the most significant subject of every culture; therefore, many kids who are used to see these shows in their original language rather than domestic movies in their mother tongue wouldn’t be able to develop their mother tongue appropriately; for example, my cousin would not be able to speak her first language as fluent as her coevals because of watching too many English cartoons. As a result, she could not start primary school with her friends, and got depressed. If she had not seen too many of these animations, she probably would not have dispirited.
In my opinion, international movie industry should be one of the most critical part of every nation regardless of its distasteful points because it can leads to interaction between nations and even makes lettered collaboration more straightforward. However, disadvantages should not be ignored; some solutions can be presented by government for this kind of issues; for example, authorities can set age limits for some of these programs.
To conclude, on the one hand, introducing foreign movies rather than domestic picture to a particular society may have some negative effects on susceptible groups such as children , but on the other hand it can enhances public knowledge about a variety of cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29679144385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0364119176 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569518716578 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.974928801 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.090909091 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133107753768 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506480180231 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042878237555 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809422287457 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406996570881 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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