You recently borrowed something from a friend. Unfortunately, the item has become damaged. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
• Remind your friend that you borrowed something from him/her
• Explain how the item became damaged
• Suggest how you can resolve the issue of the damaged item
Dear Sam,
Hope you are in good spirits and radiant health. I showed your apple watch to my cousin and all of them were so fascinated with its beauty.
I am writing this note to remind you that I need two more week in order to return apple watch I borrowed from you. I do understand that I was about to return this last week; however due to some unforeseen reason I could not give it back on time.
Unfortunately, I met with an accident that caused me a minor fracture on my left hand. I was driving my motorbike and suddenly got hit by an elderly woman, who was coming from opposite side in her sedan. After this stroke, I fell down and glass of your watch got damaged.
I know that your father presented this watch to you. I am so sorry that I caused this damage. I do understand that my sorry wont going help, hence I make sure that in next one week, I will get the glass replaced from apple service centre.
I am looking forward to see you.
Yours Lovingly,
Rohith Sharrma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-10-21 | Rohith | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-21 | naina.1234 | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...note to remind you that I need two more week in order to return apple watch I borrow...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...return apple watch I borrowed from you. I do understand that I was about to retur...
^
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn and glass of your watch got damaged. I know that your father presented this w...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... am so sorry that I caused this damage. I do understand that my sorry wont going ...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...replaced from apple service centre. I am looking forward to see you. Yours...
^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ervice centre. I am looking forward to see you. Yours Lovingly, Rohith Sharrma...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, so, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31382978723 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24543070061 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.419079358 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184527391138 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717659720132 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065878842036 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993412230522 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349918408675 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.