A neighbour recently invited you to a special party. You intended to go, but at the last minute were unable to attend. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Apologise for not going to the party
• Explain why you didn’t go
• Suggest a way to make up for missing the party
Dear Sam,
Hope you are in good spirits and radiant health. This is in regards to your party invitation, which you are going held at you newly brought house in Calgary, Canada. Having an own housing in Canada is actually a blessing.
I am so sorry that I will not be able to attend this party due to some extremely urgent work. I do understand that you told us about the party last month and we made you assured that at any cost, we will be a part of this gathering.
Actually, our sibling is coming to Canada for the very first time. One of his friends was supposed to escort him to our house; however due to some exigency, he won’t be able to visit the airport now, hence now we have no other option left than to visit the airport and escort my sibling to our house
Our sibling is going to stay for another 15 days with us. If you are comfortable, we all can make up another short gathering I coming week at your new house. This opportunity will give us a chance to make you introduce with my brother.
I am looking forward to see you.
Yours Lovingly,
Rohith Sharrma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ood spirits and radiant health. This is in regards to your party invitation, which you are go...
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Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ith my brother. I am looking forward to see you. Yours Lovingly, Rohith Sharrma...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3512195122 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24085689397 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2376132428 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256195816063 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978772993308 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736519134416 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138527078612 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756457800141 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.