Write a letter to a foreign friend who has asked if they can stay with you when visiting your country. Include
Why you do not have time to host them
An alternate date
Recommendations for what to do
Dear Mike,
I am so glad to hear from you and your visit to my country next month. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to provide you with accommodation in my apartment because I’ve started the renovation of the flat and I’m planning to completely rebuild it. That is why I will be fully occupied with it, especially taking into account that my boss gives me only a few days off in order to settle all the details with a contractor.
Meanwhile, I would like you to invite you to spend time with my family and me in December during the Christmas holidays. I will cook a turkey and my husband will make a homemade mulled wine with cinnamon, oranges, and mulled spices. I am sure you would like our celebration meal. In addition, the renovation will be over until the holidays and you will be our first guest after it.
Nevertheless, you are already coming in August and I suggest you stay in a mountain resort called “Chymbulak”. As I remember, you are keen on hiking and it will be very convenient for you to explore our mountains from that place. It is unbelievable, but from that location, it is possible to complete one day hike to “Tuuksu” glacier, “Gorelnik” waterfall, “Mametov” lake, or other quite picturesque routes.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Take care,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ttle all the details with a contractor. Meanwhile, I would like you to invite yo...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re you would like our celebration meal. In addition, the renovation will be over...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, nevertheless, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76956521739 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92308780984 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621739130435 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8820109051 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4166666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175284828865 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698445024614 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487468188364 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107691054351 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224816363672 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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