All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Being in such a competitive Surrounding companies have to look for many factors which affect their efficiency and the workflow. It is not possible for them to just look at one side since that makes it ambigious and biased. To some extent I disagree that its unnecessary since there is no clear understanding of what is right and what is wrong.First of all, Being Part of the company for a long time makes your opinion and moots biased which lead to confusions and lack of decision making based on the other factors that can affect the company health since you try to show a smug nature but if we have consultants hired they can provied us with more pertinent suggestions along with strong points on how the company should change itself so that they can have efficiency and can meet future requirements.Asking the employees to work on the suggestion part can also lead to disputes since they can have contradicting points. For instance if one employee wants a company to operate in traditional fashion since he finds it to be more efficient and on the other hand one wants to adapt the futuristic approcach. Both of them wont be able consider other points that they should have and this can lead to disputes and less efficiency.There can be a possibility that some employees have better understanding about the companies operation and its nature on how it deals with the comapred to that of consultants since they have the general knowledge on how the world operates and which can also create problems since they
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'company'?
Suggestion: company
...Being in such a competitive Surrounding companies have to look for many factors which aff...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...ding of what is right and what is wrong.First of all, Being Part of the company for a...
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Line 1, column 803, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Asking
...ciency and can meet future requirements.Asking the employees to work on the suggestion...
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Line 1, column 1228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...an lead to disputes and less efficiency.There can be a possibility that some employee...
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Line 1, column 1311, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ees have better understanding about the companies operation and its nature on how it deal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74904942966 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79287337378 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 225.845610982 60.3974514979 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.8 118.986275619 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 23.4991977007 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.4 5.21951772744 295% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248009165529 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146682416436 0.0831039109588 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707706121346 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248009165529 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 48.8420337079 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.