The given graph compares the amount of electricity manufactured and
consumed by top ten nations in 2014
Overall, the generation of electricity was slightly higher than that of
consumption in almost nations,except for Germany.Another striking feature is
that the production and consumption of electricity in China and the US was
significantly higher than the figures for other countries.
In detail, the amount of electricity manufactured and consumed by China
was the highest , at 5,398 billion kWh for the former and 5,322 billion kWh for the
latter.This figure followed by the United States with 4,099 billion kWh and 3,866
billion kWh respectively.
Regarding the remain countries , Russia was the only nation with electricity
generation and consumption being just over 1,000 billion kWh. These followers
were Japan, India, Canada, France and Brazil, its range was from 455,8 to 936,2
billion kWh.It is also noticeable that the figure for consuming was insignificantly
higher than its manufacturing in Germany. Korea was ranked as lowest country in
the chart, it just created 485,1 billion kWh and consumed roughly 449 billion kWh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59659090909 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05130663202 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.750886521 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.25 112.824112599 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194013099067 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123992051511 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915536766347 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742925154282 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683884316281 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.2329268293 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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