Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
First of all, staying healthy is a good habit and disciplinary thing. Every human being would like to be healthy and live longer due to fulfill their family responsibilities and some would like to stay healthy for societal responsibilities. Now a day, staying healthy and maintaining a balance healthy life is very important for all human being irrespective of their socioeconomic status. Maintenance of healthy life is the priority today to meet the everyday life even.
Secondly, people do various exercises to maintain their physique. Consequently they spend more money on training classes to keep them fit and for instance, some people spend on swimming, going for gym, yoga, and meditation etc routinely. According to me, spending money on training classes is unnecessary, I would prefer to spend money on yoga training for few days and then I would like to practice yoga on my own at my home on my convenience. Then going for a one hour walking would be very good choice to keep our health in a better way.
Meanwhile, Yoga training is a very good exercise for our lungs to breathe. Practicing you is not only benefitting the lungs but also it excretes the wastes from our body through exhalation and gives refreshment. Additionally, I would support for everyday walking for an hour. Because it increases the muscle and bone strength, provides good shape, proved to be a better cardiac workout. Today half of the world population are suffering from either diabetes or overweight due to sedentary lifestyle. Yoga and walking would be a better choice for them to safeguard their well being.
Finally, I would strongly recommend every day morning or evening yoga practice combined with walking. There are many scientific proofs for the salubrious effect of yoga and waking. Both enhances our blood circulation and regulates biological mechanisms in our body thereby keeping as strong. But most of us will not practice it routinely due to our daily busy schedule and simply ignore it. Health maintenance by yoga and walking involves perseverance and willpower; we have to strictly follow this everyday to live longer.
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...s exercises to maintain their physique. Consequently they spend more money on training class...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ym, yoga, and meditation etc routinely. According to me, spending money on training classes is ...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...or our lungs to breathe. Practicing you is not only benefitting the lungs but also...
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Line 4, column 499, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...lpower; we have to strictly follow this everyday to live longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85965746486 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3570909674 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136619923655 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481658548229 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614829987824 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843206470592 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840468809317 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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