The local newspaper is holding a " Best Neighbour in the Area" competition. Write a letter to the newspaper to recommend your neighbour for this competition.
- Introduce yourself
- Say whom you are recommending
- Explain why this neighbour should be the winner of this competition.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am Amit Bhagat resident of Delhi housing society for last 15 years and I am in contact with Mr Khokhar for almost 10 years.
I received information that your newspaper is holding a “Best neighbour in area” competition and I would like to recommend Mr Arun Khokhar. He is social worker and associated with charitable organisation.
He totally devoted his life for social welfare like helping the unprivileged child for their education, vocational skill training and helping them to find the employment and so on. Whatever time left after his job, he spent it to educate the child. His idea is to build the confidence so that they can grow in their life. Moreover, he doesn’t spent the time only on education but also encourage other people to do vocational training. Vocational training is for those who is not well qualified for office job but have great skill set like tailoring, plumber, electrician etc. He helps people to receive grant from NGO to support their short term vocational training.
Mr Khokhar deserve to be recognised for his work and recognition in newspaper will definitely motivate other people for social activity and such activity create equal opportunity for unprivileged people.
Your faithfully
Amit Bhagat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'doesn't' requires base form of this verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...row in their life. Moreover, he doesn’t spent the time only on education but also enc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18932038835 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79381057154 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4082670137 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133788328358 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525042301585 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982255686815 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105250311179 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101264820647 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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