Many students take part-time jobs while studying in university. Do you think it is a good idea or bad idea?
It is irrefutable that the cost of tertiary education has become very high and students have to work part time to fund their education. This situation has both positive and negative effects. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the issue in depth.
There are many reasons why working part-time is beneficial while studying in university. Firstly, higher education is very costly and students need to do part time work to fund their education. Secondly, the habit of working hard right from early years makes students realise the dignity of labour and they are better placed in life later on.
What is more, students do not indulge in any violence and crime and drugs. This is because they don’t have time for such activities. This also instils some discipline in their lives because they have to manage time effectively so that their studies don’t suffer.
Finally, while doing these jobs, they develop a network of friends doing different courses and from diverse backgrounds.
It is a negative development because it leads to stress and strain. Sometimes, students cannot strike a balance between work and study, which may result in stress.
Consequently, when students face failures or can’t cope with the pressures they can have suicidal tendencies.
On balance, I believe that being pushed to hard work is a positive development. However, there should be a limit to the number of hours students are allowed part time work, otherwise studies will suffer.
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...he number of hours students are allowed part time work, otherwise studies will suffer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17012448133 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5775685127 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2920922207 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193436219457 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664885246244 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655577393243 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879876250163 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514535841038 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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