Your friend has asked you to teach English to her or his child. You would like to borrow some books from your teacher to help you teach English to the child.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
• Tell your teacher what and when you are going to teach the child
• Describe the kind of books you would like to borrow
• Explain why you think these books will be useful
Dear Sir
I am one of the ex-students of yours from Bharti international school, Ludhiana, who is pending down this missive in order to lend some English books so that I can cede cognizance to one of my friend's progeny.
The child, to whom I will teach, is a 12-year-old kid studying in the third standard at government secondary school. He is naive to the language as his guide as a guide in his institution I am not good enough. Therefore, I have to start from the very basic for which I want some grammar books. Apart from this, storybooks and pictorial books can also be proved believable as this will add an interesting factor in his learning process. Being a teacher, you will have a blue corner of such informative and innovative books by which you can learn in the most effective way.
Moreover, as I am working at the moment, I can't make up to you during week weekdays, so Sunday would be great if you do not mind I can meet up at your place as I am planning to provide him English lessons from Monday evenings.
I look forward to your earliest reply.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully
Arshdeep Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...eover, as I am working at the moment, I cant make up to you during week weekdays, so...
^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g you in anticipation. Yours faithfully Arshdeep Kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, third, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52195121951 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70934224409 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6970457258 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306275487645 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109316658399 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583463132757 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149331165526 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01562050691 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.