Your friend has asked you to teach English to her or his child. You would like to borrow some books from your teacher to help you teach English to the child.
Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter:
• Tell your teacher what and when you are going to teach the child
• Describe the kind of books you would like to borrow
• Explain why you think these books will be useful
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to include addresses.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....................,
Dear Dolly Ma'am,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to ask a favor of borrowing few English teaching books from you. One of my friend's son wants to learn the language who has very basic knowledge and know-how. I am planning to take a written test to assess the areas of concern and efforts required before I begin. I want to begin teaching on weekends before summer vacation starts and finish by the end of it.
I would like to borrow beginners to intermediate level books. This way I can refresh the basics and begin with the intermediate one's. Also, the one's with the practice test would be great as that would help in practicing on regular basis.
Since you have been teaching English all your life and have been upgrading the books time to time to keep all the students abreast with the changes, borrowing books from you would not let me down in front of my friend who has trusted me with this big task.
Please let me know a suitable time next week when I can come to pick those books from your place. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely
Kapil Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...starts and finish by the end of it. I would like to borrow beginners to inter...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'time to'.
Suggestion: time to
... life and have been upgrading the books time to time to keep all the students abreast with the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5297029703 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19996457538 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618811881188 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9277187289 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313190296622 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102760098357 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093466580726 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162683147179 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632636188592 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.