The diagram elucidates the process that bricks are used to produced for the construction industry.
The illustrate has 7 periods. It is began by digged clay for the first step. And the last step is transfered to customers. Although has a lot of purposes, the main reason is provide for works in building or owner houses.
in the first step, clay is digged by excavator to get fuel. After that, it is given for company to process in metal grid and placed on a roller. When this activity is done, it was divided into 2 categories. the first type is mixed with sand and water. Next is wired cutter and becomes bricks. Whereas, the second type is moulded and become bricks also.
After had come through 3 process it is entered into drying oven for about 24- 48 hours. Following this, it is given into kiln with materate from 200 degree C- 980 degree and high temperature about 870- 1300 degree C respectively. And the last is cooling chamber for 48-72 hrs. Finally, packaged it was and delivered for the shops and customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oduced for the construction industry. The illustrate has 7 periods. It is began by digged cl...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
.... The illustrate has 7 periods. It is began by digged clay for the first step. And ...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...s a lot of purposes, the main reason is provide for works in building or owner houses. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...for works in building or owner houses. in the first step, clay is digged by excav...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...done, it was divided into 2 categories. the first type is mixed with sand and water...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...econd type is moulded and become bricks also. After had come through 3 process it ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5956284153 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43273140516 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5863992525 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161400235269 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527501685035 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633603250125 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121058453841 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076266955175 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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