The diagram below shows how instant noodles manufactured. Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main features and make comparisons where possible.
The flow chart below provides information about the whole process of formation of instant noodles. The complete procedure includes transportation, manufacturing in factories, packaging, and labeling, and the final product comes to market.
In the first step raw material transported from the storage silos through trucks, for example, flour, and water, oil to the processing units. In the second stage all ingredients mixed in the mixer machine which consists of different parts which perform a variety of function. After mixing oil, water and flour next part of unit have rollers where dough sheets spreads. Where in third part these long sheets cut into noodles strips and then dried plus vegetable oil added to convert them into compact form of noodles discs.
The afterward process of packaging involves adding different ingredients. These compact discs transferred to packing cups and, vegetables and spices introduced.
The final step is marketing, before introducing for selling packets label accordingly and sell.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The flow chart below provides information about the wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, second, then, third, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7160960667 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724358974359 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4338711076 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0838790473585 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302473412842 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418347066468 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415980898018 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469333812889 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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