Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
The reading and the lecture offer two opposing views on the proposed methods for stopping the spread of the cane toads. Whereas the author of the reading suggests that many proposed measures would be useful for this aim, the lecturer refutes this proposal ideas. She casts doubt on main points made in the passage by providing three reasons.
First of all, according to the text, applying a national fence could prevent the cane toads to reach specific parts of Australia. However, the lecturer argues that national fence won't be practical and beneficial, because the young toads and their eggs have found in the streams and rivers which can easily transfer from side to side and the rivers carry them regardless of the fence.
Secondly, the author of the reading discusses the collecting and destroying cane toads by many volunteers or campaigns. While, the lecturer believes that it could seem useful but untrained volunteers may cause many damages to frogs' population which are important for Australian ecosystem.
Finally, although the text states that a kind of virus could be used to avoid increasing the toads' population, the lecturer explains that this proposal approach will cause harmful aftermath. She mentions that in the case of transferring the virus to the other part of the world, it would be dangerous for another important species. Due to transporting many animals affected by this virus, to south of America, there is the devastation of many significant ecosystem species.
- The following is a memo from the marketing director of Lamfonz Pet Stores which operates thirty pet stores worldwide Five years ago our competitor Fish Emporium started advertising in Exotic Pets Monthly magazine Their sales overall have seen a steady inc 54
- Collectors prize the ancient life size clay statues of human figures made on Kali Island but have long wondered how Kalinese artists were able to depict bodies with such realistic precision Since archaeologists have recently discovered molds of human head 58
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- The following appeared as a recommendation by a committee planning a ten year budget for the city of Calatrava The birthrate in our city is declining in fact last year s birthrate was only one half that of five years ago Thus the number of students enroll 60
- Many important discoveries or creations are accidental it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rs carry them regardless of the fence. Secondly, the author of the reading disc...
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...re important for Australian ecosystem. Finally, although the text states that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56844196059 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0343202458 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176201229051 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693642797821 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729315764124 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953621810928 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713453597021 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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