Volunteer work with disadvantage groups like underprivileged children is the best way for young people to learn about the real world. What are the benefits of such work?
Volunteer activities organized to assist miserable groups such as indecent children are believed widely to be the most practical method to teach youngsters the real world. In this essay, the benefits this work brings out will be presented clearly.
Several advantages are worth mentioning when volunteer works are formed appropriately. Firstly, through those meaningful activities, the youth have a chance to associate with unhappy lives in society and deeply sympathized with unlucky children. Therefore, they realized when they are in cozy families and carefree about the future, other children in society are suffering famine, diseases and dealing with severe poverty. Consequently, young generations comprehend that they ought to respect their current lives, stop complaining about little matters along with take the efforts to help the children who need undivided attention to gain better in the future. By executing those significant actions, social life becomes more wonderful and worth-living, the relationship between people and people is increasingly steadfast.
Not to mention that, volunteer works play a crucial role in getting new experiences about humans, lives, … which are not performed in schools. The real world is far different from what children are aware of by florid descriptions in books and newspapers. Apart from a splendid background, life is also an endless story of fighting against social injustice, backwardness, cruel discrimination, illiteracy that the youth easily witness due to their journey to remote areas. As a result, youngsters with advanced thought will study and discover effective solutions to tackle these problems. A clear illustration is that social organizations always assist poor people, which makes a considerable change in their lives, inspires the citizens to dedicate themselves to society and spreads compassion messages all over the world.
In conclusion, it is essential that volunteer works should be continuously carried out to create more chances for young generations to participate and learn about the real world where they are living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66772151899 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93017298393 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9560664696 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310467913547 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947247806281 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643060961448 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184199456693 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461752772534 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.