The pie chart illustrates information about seven main sources of bank complaints in America and bar chart represent average time taken by the bank to fix those issues.
Overall,public was the prime source of complaints in America and average time required by the bank to take final action decreased over the course of five years.
To initiate with,from pie chart it is vivid that majority of complaints against bank came from public.63% of bank issues were originated by public whereas least percent of objections were raised by media,bank employee and other areas(3%&2%). Interestingly equal percent of complaints (around 10%)were lodged by government agencies and out of state source . Insurance companies reported 8% objections against bank.
Moving towards bar chart,it is clear that in 2000 bank took around 5months to address the issue.Suprisingly, resolution time of bank was maximum (6months) in 2001.Afterwards time required by bank to fix the objections decreased and in 2004 about 4months were taken by bank to execute final action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , public
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bank
...rcent of objections were raised by media,bank employee and other areas3%&2%. Interes...
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Suggestion:
...s were raised by media,bank employee and other areas3%&2%. Interestingly equal pe...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-state'?
Suggestion: out-of-state
...%were lodged by government agencies and out of state source . Insurance companies reported 8...
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...ernment agencies and out of state source . Insurance companies reported 8% objecti...
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Suggestion: , it
... against bank. Moving towards bar chart,it is clear that in 2000 bank took around ...
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Suggestion: Suprisingly
...ook around 5months to address the issue.Suprisingly, resolution time of bank was maximum 6m...
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...ime of bank was maximum 6months in 2001.Afterwards time required by bank to fix the object...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38650306748 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99543575062 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4950458451 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242846527143 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133978977833 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613473139539 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167295315866 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537853150134 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.