Write a letter to your former employer to ask him/her for a reference letter to give to your new employer. In your letter
– Remind him/her about what you were doing in the company.
– Tell him/her about the responsibilities in your new job.
– Ask him/her for a reference letter.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request you to provide a reference letter which is mandatory to submit to the human resource department of my new organization. I have worked in GSK pharmaceutical limited for 3 years from 2016 to 2019 as Area Business Manager at Toronto headquarter. I was responsible for achievement of sales target of Asclepius division's portfolio and had to lead team of 5 sales representatives based at same territory.
I am going to join Bayer lifesciences limited as Regional Business Manager and will have to look after Ontario state. As a regional head, I suppose to manage team of 15 members including 3 Area Business Managers. Moreover, based on my skills, additional responsibilities are given to me which includes designing, implementing and executing marketing strategies to augment sales of profitable products in key accounts such as government funded and private multi-speciality hospitals of Ontario.
As a part of protocol, I would have to submit reference letters from all previous companies. So, I would be grateful if you provide letter mentioning my personal details including name, employee number, total years of experience and responsibilities. If my achievements during my tenure with GSK pharmaceutical limited can be included, it would certainly benefit me.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Nirav Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...usiness Manager at Toronto headquarter. I was responsible for achievement of sale...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esentatives based at same territory. I am going to join Bayer lifesciences lim...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, i suppose, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46511627907 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40801714411 2.54303337028 134% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.397550045 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.818181818 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1097582736 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442594924862 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455873532765 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551127833561 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431767431654 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.