Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys

Grammar and spelling errors:
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childhood life is always colorful.Every child wan...
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childhood life is always colorful.Every child wants to paly with toys or withou...
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...arn from family and outside environment.That time they cannot jaudge by themselves...
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...ironment.That time they cannot jaudge by themselves what is good and what is bad....
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...themselves what is good and what is bad.They never think about their future. Chil...
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...happy to play with veraity type of toys.Their mind is soft and delicate so, with same...
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...th same toys they do not paly many days.They want changes their toys every couple o...
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...anges their toys every couple of weeks.Children always follow other children and new to...
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...ways follow other children and new toys.They never satiesfied with their pesent toys...
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...follow other children and new toys.They never satiesfied with their pesent toys.Some parents alw...
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...never satiesfied with their pesent toys.Some parents always go to shop with their ch...
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... kind of toyes and ask for the new toys.Some children cry for the toys at instant so...
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...em. Children always happy with the lagre number of toys.Actully, every parents wa...
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...ildren happy at any cost. Psycologically,some parents think that if buy more toys chi...
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...ys some children that whatever they want,parents will give me. This type of attitude wi...
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...itude will hamper their childhood life. so unnessesary toys should never buy for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19718309859 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70916020775 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.4009434603 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379345569534 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155662388113 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837131956685 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176767763929 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608536022019 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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