The debate over spoiling children with large number of toys has sparked debates on both sides of the spectrum. In my views, children should be given an appropriate number of toys instead of showering them with an overabundant number of toys.
Parents love to shower their child with love and affection. As a result, as soon as their child desires a toy, parents buy them for their children. Although, this creates a sense of bonding among parents and their children and children realise that their parents are standing with them to support their wishes and desires. But in my opinion, the disadvantages of buying excessive toys outweighs this advantage.
Despite the toys being an expression of a parent’s undeniable affection, parents are spoiling their children unconsciously by providing them with excessive toys. The harsh reality of the world is that, despite a lot of effort, people sometimes fail to achieve what they desire. And if a child grows up with the belief that his parents are always there to fulfill all his desires and if parents don’t make an effort in instilling this lesson in their child from an earlier age, then he will not be able to grasp this harsh reality. Therefore, sometimes restricting the number of toys to the child will help them understand that not everything they desire is achievable. Furthermore, parents are unconsciously making their children detached and unsocial by buying their children a lot of toys. With an excessive number of toys, a child will replace social interactions with their toys. Instead of going out and playing with other children, they will prefer to stay indoors and play with his toys only. This will have a negative impact on the child’s social developments.
To conclude, although toys are an expression of parent’s love and care for their children, but too many toys will make them antisocial and hinder their social growth. Moreover, it will prevent them from grasping the harsh reality that despite strenuous efforts, some things are beyond their reach.
- The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice to a client Homes in the northeastern United States where winters are typically cold have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating Last year that region experienced 9 79
- Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 78
- The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write 67
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05952380952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6172342207 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3539372653 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462941209932 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16788550408 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754948443433 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28961969938 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584795603464 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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