Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
I completly agree with the author's statement "Nations should pass laws to preserve any remainig wildnedss areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain" .
Firstly using land leads to afforestation and this indirectly leeds to global warming. Removing the palnts and using this land for development may to use full for that perticular time but this can cause a lot of damage to the environment in the future. this can also lead to lot of troubles in the future. As the area of forests decrease the amount of oxygen level also decrese.
Secondly as the forest area decrese this directly the effect the animals in the forest. I read an article about snakes in india, there used to be alot of snakes 20 years ago which were reduced to 75 persent in this 20 years because of using the forest area for development. Not just their are many mor animal species which are been desappered due to deforestation this can only be stoped by usage of wideness area. there are many rare species in this planent which have been disepared in this past few years.
Additionally using the wilderness area will effect our future generation a lot. In the future there may not be land for any perpous if we start using the forest for unnessary reasons. Ourfuture generations may be in lacking of forst resources . we get many resources from plants like medicin, paper and many more if our future generation dint find any land for getting resources then they might face may problems. As responcible humans we need to think about our future generations.
there are also some of the negitive if we dont use wilderness areasuch as the cost of land would increase and many people may not find shulter to live. if we dont use forest ares then we dont get any are for the new constructios and people start using the land which is in the town and this might lead llack of pland ant the cost of lands increse
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- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state even if these areas could be developed for economic gain Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47018456601 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8766891611 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214405325164 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757446020367 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998538895085 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153525417184 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14124160733 0.0667264976115 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.