Doing unpaid jobs is one of the ways to contribute to the community. Some people suppose that teenagers should be forced to do this because of several benefits to themselves as well as the society. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement.
Undoubtedly, there are several key disadvantages for teenagers. Firstly, there is an economic problem. Many adolescents live on the edge, which makes them have to find a part-time job to earn money. Thus, doing unpaid work in their free time means that they cannot make money to meet their needs. Additionally, although having to spend almost the day at school, there are numerous homeworks they have to finish in their free time. If they have to work, they are not able to study at home. In other words, it may be harmful to their study. These problems may interfere with adolescents.
Nevertheless, in spite of some drawbacks, there are clear benefits to community and teenagers. First, although adolescents are not paid for their jobs, the local government may spend the budget on several social purposes instead of paying for them. Therefore, it brings the financial benefits to community. Moreover, despite having less time to self-study at home, they have more chances to learn social skills which are not taught at school. These skills may be necessary for all walks of life. Last but not least, there are positive effects to individual development. Due to working in their free time, their physical health will be definitely improved. They also have the responsibility to society as well as having the honor of labouring efforts. Clearly, requiring teenagers to do unpaid works brings various advantages.
To sum up, although teenagers may have some problems about money and study, I favour that teenagers should be expected to do unpaid jobs in their spare time because it can bring financial benefits to community as well as help them to improve social skills and personalities.
- Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important
- Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole Do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01238390093 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69041850883 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541795665635 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8905616224 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0952380952 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359873248232 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973871576409 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920277127228 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245569486918 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461260272855 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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