You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
Dear Sir, Madam;
I am writing to ask if you are so generous as to provide me with some information with regard to the possibility of renting a place in Isfehan.
I am a Civil engineer and I am supposed to be manager of a new project in Isfehan and I have to live there for three months, from the first of September till the end of December. According to the initial estimations, the project will be finished at the predicted date, however, it may be extended.
The main reason that I am writing is finding more about accommodation there based on both my needs and my interests. I would rather live in a house, preferably with a back yard, where I have privacy and freedom. Since I am single, a house with two bedrooms and a kitchen would be appropriate. I really care about bathroom cleanness and this item is my first priority on my checklist.
As I mentioned, I am would be project manager and certainly, I will have a crammed schedule. I prefer to live in a place where I have easy access to different restaurants and local shops. Equally important, as I suffered from high blood pressure, it is essential to live in a neighborhood with a hospital.
I really appreciate it if you could offer me some suggestions that I can evaluate before moving to Isfehan.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Yalda Asgari.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 189, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
... different restaurants and local shops. Equally important, as I suffered from high bloo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, really, so, as to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61157024793 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89092043149 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5437582726 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201547823396 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074752491576 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861156157113 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124300631995 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101534580156 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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