The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea.
What are the reasons and solutions?
There is no doubt that wildlife and submarine life have been affected by human development over last decades significantly. A great deal of research have been done to address this issue and reduce the drawbacks associated with modern era.
To begin with, thanks to new development, environment has been influenced in several different aspect. Global warming, the ozone layer depletion, air pollution, water pollution and degradation of natural resources are some of these problems. Besides, increased number of cars, factories and other human activities that cause large amount of fossil fuel, also, can bring new set of negative consequence. As an outstanding instance, acid rain which has a direct relation to the amount of CO2 footprint, will result in dramatically destruction of animal habitat and vegetation. Moreover, unplanned construction and deforestation lead in less landscape which can be a suitable region for birds.
Taking these reasons into consideration, there are some effective solution to tackle this problem. The first and foremost measure that should be taken is about some friendly-environment solution combat with global warming. Imposing and enforcing some restrict laws, replacing fossil fuel with renewable source of energy such as solar and wind, and also, setting tougher standard with regard to vehicle and factories emission are considered as some effective measure to hinder the existence dangers for animal species.
It is noteworthy to say that, unfortunately, in many countries, due to rule relaxation, there is no supervision on the waste disposal system of factories. A survey conducted about the submarine life indicate that those contamination which released in to the oceans and seas, can cause some detrimental effect on the number and kind of fish. It is claimed that over few next decades, there would be few sort of fishes.
To conclude, it seems that human related development such as modern vehicles, more industrial centers, and also, lack of law enforcement result in significant damage to environment that reduced the number of animals. However, by applying some measure this problem can be prevented.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ent, environment has been influenced in several different aspect. Global warming, the ozone layer...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this contamination' or 'those contaminations'?
Suggestion: this contamination; those contaminations
... about the submarine life indicate that those contamination which released in to the oceans and sea...
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Line 7, column 399, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sort seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sorts'.
Suggestion: few sorts
...t over few next decades, there would be few sort of fishes. To conclude, it seems tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, kind of, no doubt, sort of, such as, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48502994012 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99596343589 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61377245509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5475611027 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.133333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812914238179 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251729065306 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286473442609 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390750648479 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182478189369 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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