The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some people think this causes problems, whilst other people think that old people have an important role to play. How far do you agree or dis agree?
Nowadays, more and more people are eating junk food instead of healthy food like our ancestors used to eat. Some of our ancestors lived for 100 years and was still able to do all the works, but in these generation life expectancy reduced due to unhealthy food, thus more and more people are getting old in the early age. In some countries the number of old people is more than the young people, that causes some problems. I slightly agree with this statement.
First of all, if more people getting old and some of them can't work on their on own, then the young people required to take care of them. Moreover, if old people are more than young, then it will cause unbalance of in that country because their young minds have to bear dual responsibilities. Furthermore, in these modern world of technology the country needs more fresh and young minds to upgrade that technology and help developing the nation. Except some people many old people still don't know how to use mobile phones, laptops and any electronic gadgets. In addition to this, as the number of old people increasing, the amount of working people is decreasing in country. By that effect economy of any country will decrease.
On the other hand, old people are previous face of society. The more person gets older he/she develops more maturity and experience. Old people are the excellent source of knowledge and skill as they experienced their whole life. Moreover, they can advice the young minds about problems related their life, career, important decisions, etc. Many old people in every country carries their cultural heritage, its rules and regulations and they will pass these next to their kin.
In conclusion, if the number of old people will increase the problems will also increase but old people has lot to offer to the new generation and their young minds.
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- In the present era children are found to have fewer responsibilities than it used to be in the past time Some people consider it as positive development however some other people believe it to be a negative trend Discuss both the views and give your own o 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
... still able to do all the works, but in these generation life expectancy reduced due to unhealth...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ore people getting old and some of them cant work on their on own, then the young pe...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...nds to upgrade that technology and help developing the nation. Except some people many old...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...xcept some people many old people still dont know how to use mobile phones, laptops ...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...ed their whole life. Moreover, they can advice the young minds about problems related ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83227848101 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40228645492 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2760781207 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406867298006 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157943713407 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105369309449 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272030461404 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507651289702 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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