Language is a way to express feelings. Unfortunately, these days, various languages are becoming extinct.Although some individuals may ascertain that life would be better with the elimination of distinct languages, i strongly disapprove of this notion as a language empowers individuals with knowledge and skills.
Firstly, presence of different languages provide individuals with communication skills and employment. When a person migrates from one place to another, learning a new language becones crucial. Language is a tool to learn other cultures and traditions. Not only would one get familiar with other nations' people, but can acquire a job as well. If someone is not convinced with the amenities offered by own nation, he or she has a option to move abroad. For example, my sister is settled in Canada, a developed country, in order to avail better facilities. Although our first language is Punjabi, she learned English to achieve her goal. This, in fact, assists her to grasp that nation's culutral understanding in addition to get employed. Nevertheless, these are the two reasons to rescue regional languages from being diminished.
Further, preventing the various mother tongues empowers people with added entertainment sources. As many periodicals, magazines, comics, songs and movies published in different regional languages, people can take benefit of it only if they are acquainted with that language. Punjabi songs are listened by millions of people living abroad, and some English speakers are endeavouring to learn this language. Hence, languages have to be safeguarded among the society for entertaining purposes.
In conclusion, the more one will protect languages which are at the verge of extinction, the more one can acquire knowledge, employment and amusement. The onus to preserve them is lies on individuals of the society. Ultimately, everyone has freedom to choose any language.
- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... various languages are becoming extinct.Although some individuals may ascertain that lif...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...es offered by own nation, he or she has a option to move abroad. For example, my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54081632653 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07361250055 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2020351053 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224092681578 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636175539297 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470079986832 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135901041595 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590063591843 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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