A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• suggest an interesting part of the city to live in
• describe the public transport in your city
• say how your friend can meet new people there
Hello Akshay,
Good to hear that you are relocating to Mumbai, the city I am living in since childhood. I would be glad to welcome you to this beautiful and pleasing city.
As your office is in Andheri, that is in the midst of the city, there are many residential societies to settle in at Andheri west. Moreover, the Juhu beach is in proximity to that area, for your early morning running routines.
To travel in the city, you can take a bus or local train to move around; to make it easy for you, you can download M-indicator application on your phone to guide with the schedules and stops.
Mrs Shruti works in the same office you are assigned at, she can help you get to know more colleagues at your workplace. Apart from that, I am adding you to our Watsapp group for weekend activities to get to know other people as well.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47305389222 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40413009519 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0531094378 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269319998671 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10405504621 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536924582375 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117060319872 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494388381729 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.