People attend university for many reasons. What do you think why people attend universities? Use specific reasons and example to support your idea.
Education has always played a significant role in one's life. Though there is no shortage of reasons that why people attend university, from my point of view, I think that they pursue their higher education, fundamentally, because it not only helps them to build strong social communication skills and benefits them with their future careers, but also It changes them to an influential person in their communities that it can play a significant role in their country's overall economic growth.
During their tertiary education, people are more likely to be attached to a large number of people of different thoughts and levels so that it will help them to learn how to communicate with different personalities appropriately. It is a very significant point to intercommunicate with one according to his/her level to avoid misunderstanding and conflictions. My first day at University, for instance, when I entered the office Because I had never talked to a university president before, I was rude to him: I negotiated with him informally like a friend of mine, so it caused me to be withdrawn from the University. Had I had a good communication skill, I have not been banished from our university.
Another key reason for holding this opinion is that higher education opens world-gate of new occupation opportunities. As we all know, nowadays, it has approximately become improbable to find a career with high revenue without higher education credential. Specifically, in our country, one searching for a job must have a tertiary diploma; otherwise, it's almost impossible to find a way of livelihood. My personal experience can be a compelling example of this. Five years ago, when I was graduated from high school, I decided to stop my studies, so I chose to work in a restaurant as a waiter; I worked there for three months, but the income was as low as even I couldn't afford my own necessities, so I sent my resumes to many institutions and organisations to search for a high-income job, but I could never get one because all required a tritairy certification. Thereby I realised the distinction of higher education; hence, thereby, I enrolled at a local university to expand my knowledge further vaster.
Besides the affirmative impacts of tertiary education on our social skills and our future career, it also changes us to the fruitful person in our life, which plays a significant role in our congregation's advancements. When ones grow up and seek education, they acquire knowledge of life: they thrive physically, personally, financially, and mentally, which it initiates the Constitution of an improved, advanced or improved constituency or civilisation.
To put them all in a nutshell, one heed University not only because it cultivates their social abilities and provides them with job opportunities, but also it shifts them to a sample symbol of their constituencies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13800424628 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29585404451 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545647558386 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.497472839 48.9658058833 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.333333333 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110833906685 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321513597466 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032829933756 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548748343908 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341201291195 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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