would you prefer online shopping. discuss both advantages and disadvantages of online shopping
Shopping online via Internet has become the new normal these days. I believe shopping on the internet has more advantages over disadvantages.
Purchasing online from books, tickets, electronics to groceries is becoming more popular and prefered by most individuals. It removes the middle man and brings products directly from factory outlets to our door step which reduces the price of the product. It is easy to access all things at one place, for example I don't have to go out side in person to visit different stores to get different types of goods and saves me a lot of time and energy. Ecommerce websites also help to scale up business quickly and it is not required to have a physical store.
On the other hand, online market places has a negative effect on small scale business and also on the road side vendors. By shopping online we cannot look at the product physically and can only check and feel only after the product is delivered. When purchasing groceries online for instance, we have no control on checking quality of vegetables before we purchace and I feel it is always a good idea to buy them at the local store. This also helps local vendors.
In conclusion, buying things online is much more easy, comfortable and time saving rather than going outside to visit a physical store. It is also easy for the business to open an online store as it is cost efficient, easily managable and has more reach on the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... all things at one place, for example I dont have to go out side in person to visit ...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ne place, for example I dont have to go out side in person to visit different stores to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73015873016 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52338520941 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0422776684 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191434089433 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772671566295 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701880714294 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135073175378 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803805883227 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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