In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In the morphing modernized era, the financial role of parents are equally distributed. Thus, a mounting concern arouse on the two uprising scenarios. While one side argued on the positive impact as the substantial income being capable to benefit children, others opposed on the ground of the loosened bond which devastated the toddlers' mental health. From my perspective, I opt to partially abject on the both upfront opinions. Hence, the demonstration will be provided in this following essay.
First glance, it is unreasonably impetuous to conclude that children are to be brought about the satisfaction on the account of money. However wealthy one can flaunt, the fact that juvenile beings might be susceptible to the aroused predicament in expenditure are most likely to pump them into badly behaviors without proper parental guidance. Were a kid to retrieve any favored items in whatsoever situation, the perception he exerted on money would be misled.
On the other hand, it is indisputably that the subtle force that stimulated grown-ups to engage in sacrifice of time devoted to youngsters may credited to the innate monetary willingness. A perfect home may be extracted to many criteria with the top list indicating finance. Eluding the petrification of making livings which revolved into psychological disorders as stress, anxiety, the quality of effectively raising kids are guaranteed owing to fully bid of the height of initial task: to bring up children. Regarding the case that domestic violence triggered by financial problems, affected ones are growing up without neither grace nor stable mentality.
To sum up, either of the statements above are illustrating the exclusive scenarios. it is up to us to make time up scheduled and balanced between working and raising young ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31228070175 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94679610149 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3718068918 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0841276043386 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259853714423 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293977201853 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470920413088 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405976345206 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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