Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’
How true do you think this statement is?
What measure can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible than the mass expansion in the number of private cars, which could bring a lot of negative impacts. From my perspective, throughout analysis, the consequences for this mounting predicament and the resolution to alleviate it will be illustrated in my following essay.
There is no denying that traffic problems in many crowded cities are culminated from the increase in the usage of private cars. As more people commute by their own cars in peak times, traffic congestion takes place everyday, which not only causes many disadvantages in people's daily life, but also the surge of car accidents. Apart from this, the environment is also affect negatively. Since most cars use fossil fuels, the air in urban areas becomes more polluted day by day, which affects badly to our health.also, this will bring about a profound impact on the shortage of fossil fuels, which has been concerned about in years.
Regarding potential solutions, improving public transport is better. One of the main reasons why people prefer traveling by cars is public transportation’">transportation’s infrastructure is not comfortable enough. Therefore, when improving the public transportation’">transportation’s quality and apply more routes, people would tend to travel by cars less and using city buses, jams and metro. Another possible solution, which has been successful in many countries such as Germany and Singapore, is imposing high taxes on cars. As soon as the price of cars becomes higher, as a result,less people could afford private cars.
In conclusion, it seems that the rise in traffic issues and environmental problems are the main consequences associated with the increment in private vehicles. potential solutions would involve improvement in public transportation and also, the high taxes imposition of cars.
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...ublic transportation and also, the high taxes imposition of cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53979238754 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.22797726071 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602076124567 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1625759274 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176401535213 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615587791341 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546015878277 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890282929482 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716093589743 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.