The desire of corporations of maximizing profits hurts the general welfare of the nation.
This a fact that is borne by the common masses, that a conglomerate giant, in order to maximize its profits harms the nation in many ways. But, if logical thinking is applied to this fact one would see that it is not the desire to generate more revenue rather, breaking the norms of government as well as inefficiencies or corruption within the system/government that actually hurts a nation.
If we look into some typical corporate giants, they will either be some manufacturing company , or IT/Software company or some Finance related firm. The two main ways a corporate can harm the nation, are harming nations natural reserves or nations economy through financial frauds. In both the cases as much as the corps are responsible so is the government. To operate in a nation a corporate has to follow some guidelines and rules, laid down by the government . Now, either by violating the norms and rules or finding loopholes in them, the corporations harm the general welfare of the country. This could easily be avoided by laying down iron-clad rules, devised by experts of respective fields and honest monitoring of the adherence to these rules by the corporations. If one looks superficially at any accident, pollution or economic fraud caused by a corporation, one would straight way blame the corporation . While there is no way to deny the fact the respective corporation is responsible for the fact by violating the rules, but it would not had been possible if the corporation bypass the norms and rules of the government or the government had done honest, efficient monitoring. It is the nature and wish of each and every corporate to expand and grow financially from this comes the desire the maximize profit, which ultimately leads to rule breaking by some crooked method, which goes wishfully or ignorantly bypassed by the government.
One good but deeply saddening example would be the Chernobyl disaster , which took lives of thousands of people and affecting generations of people . Improper maintenance and cooling of nuclear rods led to the accident. In order to save costs, which was done from the desire to maximize profit led to the terrible accident. But if the auditors had not ignored the working condition of the power plant the accident could have been avoided.
So, it can be concluded it is not the desire the maximize the profits rather the breaking of norms and inefficiencies of the government to prevent such activities is what causes harm to the nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 416.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98557692308 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87201588434 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7596442962 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307059792488 0.218282227539 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853433827028 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713262182842 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163695812953 0.128457276422 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596010434316 0.0628817314937 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.