The desire of corporations of maximizing profits hurts the general welfare of the nation

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The desire of corporations of maximizing profits hurts the general welfare of the nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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This a fact that is borne by the common masses,...
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...aking the norms of government as well as inefficiencies or corruption within the ...
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...vernment that actually hurts a nation. If we look into some typical corporate g...
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...ill either be some manufacturing company , or IT/Software company or some Finance...
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...l either be some manufacturing company , or IT/Software company or some Finance r...
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...the government. To operate in a nation a corporate has to follow some guidelines and rules...
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...s and rules, laid down by the government . Now, either by violating the norms and...
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...ules, laid down by the government . Now, either by violating the norms and rules ...
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...ration, one would straight way blame the corporation . While there is no way to d...
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...ould straight way blame the corporation . While there is no way to deny the fact ...
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... financially from this comes the desire the maximize profit, which ultimately leads to rule ...
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...goes wishfully or ignorantly bypassed by the government. One good but deeply s...
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... example would be the Chernobyl disaster , which took lives of thousands of people...
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...ople and affecting generations of people . Improper maintenance and cooling of nuc...
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...t can be concluded it is not the desire the maximize the profits rather the breaking of norm...
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... and inefficiencies of the government to prevent such activities is what causes h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, well, while, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 11.1786427146 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 416.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98557692308 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87201588434 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7596442962 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307059792488 0.218282227539 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853433827028 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713262182842 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163695812953 0.128457276422 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596010434316 0.0628817314937 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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