Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children
to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What
consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In
my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative
long-term consequences.
If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a
certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I
have learnt that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is important
to be able to say ‘no’ to children when they misbehave or try to push against these
boundaries. This is the only way to help young people to regulate their desires and
develop self-control. In my view, parents who do the opposite and constantly give
in to their children’s demands, are actually doing more harm than good. They are
failing their children rather than being kind to them.
The children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several
negative personality traits. The first and most obvious danger is that these children
will become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the feelings or
needs of others. One consequence of such an attitude could be that these adults are
unable to work successfully in teams with other colleagues. A second negative trait
in such people could be impulsiveness. A person who has never lived with any
boundaries is likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before
making decisions. This may lead, for example, to compulsive shopping, unwise
financial decisions, or even criminal activity.
In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and respect
for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this
objective.
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- children should always follow their parents advice to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 61
- Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want Is this a good way to raise children What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31654676259 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90932263076 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6356777876 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439286681598 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141186540596 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870694337562 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111061249934 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891856531226 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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