Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
It is said that some parents tend to be overly permissive and lenient and provide whatever their children want. I believe that this parenting style is not good and can have some negative long-term consequences for children raised with this way of upbringing.
On the one hand, I can explain why it is wrong for parents to buy their children anything that they ask for, and let them do any activity they like. According to my experience, this type of nurture can spoil children. Also, in this situation, such children find it difficult to obey or follow the rules set by their parents and teachers. After a while, they get used to getting whatever they want, and if the conditions are not according to their desires, they may misbehave and nag. I believe that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary. Parents should be able to say “no” to their children when they have an irrational request. Additionally, adults should show their children that any bad activity has some negative consequences. If parents do the opposite, they cannot expect to have well-behaved and self-control children.
On the other hand, permissive parenting has some negative outcomes. Children who are raised with this parenting style will become selfish and self-centred, as they always think that others must serve them. Such young people learn not to have any attention to the feeling of people. In addition to this, these children not only find it difficult to make friends and communicate with various individuals but also cannot work and cooperate in a team. As a result, they may become isolated and introverted and experience loneliness throughout their lives which can cause them to become depressed and stressed out.
In conclusion, in my view, if parents follow their children ‘s demands more than what is necessary, they do more harm than good, and they cannot have respectful and sociable children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08598726115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7126823222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53821656051 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7342164852 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.644146858103 0.244688304435 263% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202803922172 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11871922247 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407905309037 0.151304729494 270% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123390685642 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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