Th pie chrts below the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

Th pie chrts below the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts compares the proportion of with connecting to a network shopping sales for retail parts in New Zealand over the decade years period.

We can see that in New Zealand the greatest proportion of sales is travel, with 36% in 2003, while in 2013 the highest percentage is film/music, with 33%.

According to the pie charts, the second highest sales for retail sectors are books, with 19% but in 2013 it was increased to 22%. A very small percentage of sales in 2013 is clothes and dramatically decreased in 2013 to 16%. However, in 2003 sales clothes, with 24%.

The travel sales for retail declined from 20% in 2003 to 29% in 2013, and these sectors higher than other parts sales. Even though the film/music sales for rerail steadly increased over one decade period of years from 21% in 2003 to 33% in 2013.

Overall looking at the two pie charts we can see that sales for retail sectors increased negligible percentage from 2003 to 2013 but there have small percentages of charts.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39730460888 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0326750966 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408397798443 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198807494855 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058562657813 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246292301209 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442434740765 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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