No doubt business is done mainly to earn profits, but some business ethics should also be kept in mind. What do you think ,is today's businessman ethical in his practices?
Nowadays, almost every entrepreneur is trying to enhance their business at a rapid pace. Their team's creative ideas help them to gain profit. In this scenario they often forget other's concerns and disadvantages. Some people suggest that, their business related scheme ought to be fair to all regardless of their own benefits.
There are many examples that proves business person always seeks their earning does not matter what effect it has on society. First and foremost thing, in the name of promotions big firms and organzations of promote discrimination of skeentone. They advertise their product and make people believe that having bright and fair skin is only way to become successful. To examplify this, in India there is a company named "Fair and lovely". It has some legel allegations and cases in order to promote only beautiful people and in against make fun of people who have dark skin.
On the other hand, some people still have belief in humanity as they have concern about society and nature. As plastic is highly toxic in environment, many businessman have stopped packaging of their product using polythene. Moreover, numbers of television channel's producers are strictly avoiding any kind of promotion of alcoholic drinks.
Hammering the Last nail, it can be Said that, "to each his own". No doubt many business owners are keen towards their benefits, but still some kind hearted people working for nation's betterment and following their business ethics very well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lp them to gain profit. In this scenario they often forget others concerns and di...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun businessman seems to be countable; consider using: 'many businessmen'.
Suggestion: many businessmen
...plastic is highly toxic in environment, many businessman have stopped packaging of their product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, kind of, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27800829876 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63116348748 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.107968977 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146083185269 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451618196933 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05492640772 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936690188276 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630687361263 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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