A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past, which makes education an important factor for students to become successful in their future life. In fact, the government has a crucial impact on national education system as well as the quality of schools' programs. While many people believe that a nation should obligate its students to study one curriculum until they attend college, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, a nation should encourage students to choose different curriculums. I fell this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the same curriculum for all students has a negative impact on student education because this can be boring for some students, who are interested in other subjects. It would be predictable that this reduces students’ motivations for studying. In contrast, if students have a chance to study their interesting programs, they will be more motivated and successful. To cast light on this, in our country students have to study a fixed program until they enter college. Students who are interested in science and mathematics have to study some subject areas that are boring for them such as the Arabic language, Sociology, Religion, and Literature. Because there are no other choices for a lot of students, some of them decided to stop studying and quit school. Thus, a mandatory program can completely harmful to society by losing talented students from schools.
Furthermore, if a nation has the same national program, students will not be able to find their potential and talent, which lead some major problems when they enter to college. Students should know what they want, and what they can before going to college or university. Obviously, this would be impossible for a student who never studied public health to find out that he is interested in health sciences. Therefore, the broad option choice helps students to determine their talent and select a major of study based on their skills and capabilities. A comprehensive statistical study conducted by a sophisticated research team has shown that motivated students get more scores in the exams, also they can get a job faster than other students. Consequently, a different type of curriculum can be extremely effective for students in the community.
Nonetheless, having just one national curriculum has plenty of profits for the government but not for students. In addition, because of limited resources a government more likely want to perform the same program of study for the whole country. Education and employment of teachers, buying equipment, building more schools, and providing national enterance exams are factors that a government would like to propose the same national curiculum, even this lead to a lot of catastrophic results in the future. The more money the government pay, the more students get interested in education. Hypothetically, this approach is a way to conserve national budget, but long story short, all students and their parents are quiet disappointed by this method.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that a nation should have a lot of attractive and different programs for students. This will help students to be motivated, and also they will find this method more attractive and useful, which help them to become brilliant in their field of study. Although, there are some benefits of one national curriculum for the nation by time and money-saving, the harmful effect of this belief are completely inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22902097902 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86120560359 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475524475524 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 930.6 618.680645161 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7040325551 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.038461538 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19230769231 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368396954057 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109607130832 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772173288915 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229160956618 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422100027765 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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