In some countries an increasing numer of people are suffering from health problams as aresult of eating too much fast food.It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people eat too much fast food, consequently it leads to different kind of illness in some countries.
Nowadays, this countries such as Britain, USA and Malaysia are growing about to eat too more fast food by most people. Because some people think fast foods are cheaper and comfortable to eat than other fresh green foods. This kind of nutrition save people's time. Therefore, they always eat this type of food. Moreover, this foods are to prepare very easy. However, people do not think consequence and their health. Hence, various type of illness, especially fatness. This is global problem in the worldwide.
Besides, there are various heavy diseases for example, blood flow, heart problems, diabetes mellitus and so on. Some people think their budget to buy eating consequently they compel to buy fast food. But when they become ill, they may be spend more than buying fast food. They should spend their money buying healthy foods instead that.
Government should to impose the tax different kind of ways. For instance, someone eat too much fast food, government should be taken half of their salary per person of family when they may be work somewhere. Besides, some nutrition cafes should organize different type of healthy foods or drinking such as for to be health cocktail, green salads and so on. Accordingly people will learn healthy life.
In my opinion, every people should take care their lifestyle. Some people might be hate from the government for imposing taxes. This is their task. So they think our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01568627451 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30934780276 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556862745098 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2138395765 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9047619048 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334576465235 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107856819138 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699256101889 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213963999048 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647669055825 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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