You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Currently there is a contentious argument over whether senior citizens adapt better to changing workplace than employees of younger age group. I believe that senior citizens might be more beneficial in administrative roles that involve decision making however, the major workforce of any company should prefer younger age group who not only are more zestful but are also eager to learn more quickly. In this essay I will discuss why I agree that younger workforce is more preferred than elder population in response to changing workplace.
Beyond any qualms there are myriad of rationale reasons that prove that younger employees are more responsive of rapidly changing workplace norms than elderly population. Fresh graduates have their whole career at stake and if they do not learn the new techniques then they will be left behind in their career. Moreover, a newcomer from college who is already aware about the latest technological advancements is likely to catch up even more wistfully as compared to an employee in his sixties who has little or no idea about the latest technology. For example, when computers replaced the file work in rural banks in India it was the younger employees who shouldered the responsibility and completely transformed the workstation with their ability to respond to the changing ideas in modern workplace.
On the contrary, some people believe that with age come experiential learning and ability to make instinctive decisions for the whole company. For this reason it is better to retain the employees over fifty years of age as these employees are better equipped to handle pressures situations and risk management. However, I believe that except administrative roles which are better suited for above fifty age group rest of the team members should comprise of a younger age group. Such age group is equipped to dedicate their time, energy and latest technological knowledge for the benefit of the organization with better physical and mental cognitive energy.
In conclusion, I believe that above fifty employees comprise the heart and soul of the company for managing the administrative positions. However, preference should be given to fresh graduates who would not only adapt but even sustain in accordance to the changing work environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...e group rest of the team members should comprise of a younger age group. Such age group is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27397260274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81328110439 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531506849315 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8891511917 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.076923077 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1895781365 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711642529835 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418484489862 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112865682508 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327152960466 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.