There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Nowadays, there are a lot of sorts of music existing in modern life, as a consequence, some people think that traditional type of music is essential. However, others believe that modern music is more respectable. In this essay I will describe my own opinion about the statement.
The first point is that national music is essential for country. Think that traditional music is considerable part of national holidays and customs. For example, Uzbek national musicians sing at every morning Palov, which is vital custom of my nation. Furthermore, most tradition music is positive and people feel go...
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traditional music is considerable part of national holidays and customs
traditional music is the considerable part of national holidays and customs
which is vital custom of my nation
which is a vital custom of my nation
waves of this music are also influence on listener’s brain
waves of this music are also influencing on listener’s brain
modern music is more spread between young and middle aged people.
modern music is more spreading among young and middle aged people.
are more often listened by young generation.
are often listened more by young generations.
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