To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this competitive world, everyone wants to do his own business. To look into this matter, some people argue that mathematics is the key to every business. I completely agree with this statement, in my opinion, everyone should have commands on maths otherwise they do not have good problem-solving skills as well as it also improves overall accuracy in the monthly budgets.
To begin with, in this modern fast-paced life, every individual wants to become a successful businessman. No doubt, youngsters are passionate and capable to do hard work, as well as, they have capabilities to generate new ideas, by this, they start their own business. Moreover, when they start their business they get success in their initial levels, however, when the business grows or needs to expand, then their decisions are so shaking, as a result, in most of the cases, they reach to closures of their company. In other words, they have poor decision-making skills because of some reasons that affect their business life.
To cope with this problem, every business person should have expertise in maths. In other words, every youngster should focus on math subjects in their academic routine, it improves interpersonal qualities, for instance, by studying maths, everyone can able to improve their problem-solving skills. Moreover, it also enhances the budgeting capability such as the finance sector plays a major role in the growth of each company. it can take the whole company from bottom to top or vice versa. Hence, it is accepted that calculations have many purposes, anyone can get great achievements in their working life.
To conclude, although there are many factors that are considered for the success of any organization, good mathematics skills can able to make a good decision-maker which is the basic rule of any business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...jor role in the growth of each company. it can take the whole company from bottom ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19865319865 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84409162055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572390572391 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2152086915 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769339408378 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266978407705 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287553186204 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437769509105 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031130498251 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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