A lot of governments believe that the most significant goal is economic progress, while others believe that other progress are as important as economic progress. I agree with the latter view because of several reasons.
On the one side, economic progress is crucial because it reflects country's economic welfare. The better the progress is, the prosperous the citizens are. Thus, this often becomes government's main goal because government wants their citizens to live prosperously and happily. For example, in some countries their governments' main goals are to make huge economic advancement in certain years. It is because in the past their citizens live poorly and now the governments want them to live prosperously. However, other progresses are actually as important as economy progress
On the other side, there are other progresses that are as important as economic progress. This can be health progress, and safety progress, which will also cause citizens to live happily and comfortably in a country. This is because, if citizens' health and safety are protected, they won't be anxious in living their life. For instance, in Denmark, the health of citizens are protected by affordable insurance and the country has low crime number. As a result, Denmark ranks 2 as the country which has highest happiness index.
In conclusion, economic progress is important because it reflects country's economic welfare, which will determine how prosperous country's citizens are. However, I agree that there are other progresses that are as crucial as economic progress because those progresses can make people living without anxiety in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40310077519 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73266534508 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2565669089 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351582330947 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135497655561 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105384127833 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260154377448 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494133882628 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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