Companies spend millions each year on advertising online in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need.
Advertising campaigns such us digital magazines and on hoards are soaring in business industry, organizations pay large sum of money on this yearly. By doing this, many consumers may urge to buy products which they are not intended to purchase. This essay will suggest that merchandising can be positively guiding to customers and too many adverts may create artificial wants is the primary negative side.
Informing services and products’ information visible for marketing segments would be an advantageous act for those who are in difficult situation that make a choice. This tend to allows them to learn about products create an option by comparing to another brands rather than buy in outdated purchases. The economist magazine recently reported that by the help of hoards, almost 60 percent of drivers directly bought goods and they were also satisfied by their time-saving act instead of searching or browsing.
Despite these advantages, people often attracted by brand’s image, power and color of picture or video’s. This underlying condition might lead people to buy false needs nudging them to obtain special things based on temporary emotion, and later buyers cannot find actual needs from things they have already purchased. This impractical aspiration made people cannot decide their own standards of criteria and assessments. Examples can be seen as children, who are easily attracted by games, firstly they are eagerly interested on this and later parents find toys from in the corner of the room.
Overall, noticeable marketing can be positive result if it is balanced and comparable, however, we should also be aware of that some businesses are shaping our needs to unwanted requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
... By doing this, many consumers may urge to buy products which they are not intended to...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'allow'.
Suggestion: allow
...uation that make a choice. This tend to allows them to learn about products create an ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34814814815 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77242941901 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681481481481 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8027433639 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.272727273 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169244850928 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577843757048 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311932898659 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875216725679 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351637759783 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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