Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?
Every year, businesses spend millions on billboards, magazines, and internet advertising. These advertisements may persuade consumers to purchase unnecessary things. The highly relevant issue has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph.
On the one hand, the merits of corporations budgeting millions bucks on advertising, including online, in publications, and on billboards would be the enhancement of profits and product branding of the company. This means that Bernard Arnault’s corporation allocates their fund to collaborate with Kendal Jenner as a brand ambassador for Louis Vuitton and this famous France brand promotes the products in well-known spots, Billboards in NYC Town Square. Furthermore, the advertising purposes can facilitate societies to discover the latest product of branded items. Particularly, groups of people, socioelite for knowing the variation of products as tertiary needs in their life. For instance, American Societies require them to obtain up-to-date seasonal products in the aim of not only completing a series of collections but also fulfilling their lifestyle.
On the other hand, the demerit of this is that the entrepreneur who lacks experience in managing business plans and strategies may lead a company to go bankrupt. Take WeWork Company as an example, a start up co-working space company which has collapsed because the corporation is unable enough to manage the leases and the debt obligations and also the owner adheres to orthodox teachings. Moreover, most Z generations carelessly decide to take credit and online loans for purchasing unnecessary goods just because of “Fear Of Missing Out”. Eventually, this issue can create depletion savings and mental illness in their life.
To sum up, several types of advertisements which are spent by corporations every single year, carry out the positive sides including the escalation of profits and the ease of people to invent the newest product. Nevertheless, the lack of this can lead the company to be insolvent and drive modern youth stumbled with poor finance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... and drawbacks, which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph. On the one hand, the meri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5572755418 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04385855573 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625386996904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7914413099 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137515810243 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462978219079 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318934609439 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849149009352 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233055533529 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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