Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the skyrocketing development of technology, the past decades have witnessed huge progress of the society. While this brings about increasing living standards, some may argue that it also gives birth to some rules, which are too strict for young people to follow. However, I do not agree with this opinion. From my perspective, it is beneficial for young people to follow these rules, since they help the youth to develop good behaviors and also protect them from potential dangers.
To begin with, the current rules help to keep young people on the right track. It is very common that many youngsters do not have a clear understanding of the society and its mechanism since most of them are in schools and lack social experience. Thus, the possibility of their misbehaviors can be at an extremely high level. For example, young people may feel it unnecessary for them to study at schools and thus just quit. Instead, they just wander along the streets every day, with nothing to do. In this case, it is highly possible that they will become jobless in the future, or even become criminals. However, rules can make sure that most of the young children can be well educated before their adulthood, and such situations mentioned above will be strangled in the cradle.
Furthermore, these rules can ensure the order of the society. Rules and regulations are made by the authorities to let the society run in an orderly way, without which the society will fall in a turmoil. Hence, it is universally acknowledged that abiding by the regulations contributes to the maintenance of the society order. Meanwhile, if everybody follows the regulations, then the society will become more harmonious and efficient. Thus, more achievements and breakthroughs can be attained, thereby benefitting individuals more in return. Once realizing the advantages of obeying the rules, the youth will be more willing to do so in the future, which forms a virtuous cycle. The reason why they may find it hard to accept these rules lies in the fact that they have not understand the nature of these rules and the benefits of them.
However, some rules impose unnecessary restrain on the young generation. There does exist some regulations, like students have to follow a certain answering patterns in order to gain the points in exams. With higher points, they can be admitted to their ideal academies. This may curb their creativity and imagination in some way. Nonetheless, the solution to this problem is not acting against the rules. Only by trials and errors, will the regulations system become better in the future.
In a nutshell, the merits of obeying rules prevail over the demerits. Therefore, I suppose the rules that current society expects the young people to follow are not too strict, as they can keep the youth on the right track and help to maintain the society order.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly way" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the authorities to let the society run in an orderly way, without which the society will fall in...
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Line 5, column 776, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...les lies in the fact that they have not understand the nature of these rules and the benef...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'pattern'?
Suggestion: pattern
...ents have to follow a certain answering patterns in order to gain the points in exams. W...
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Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regulations'' or 'regulation's'?
Suggestion: regulations'; regulation's
...es. Only by trials and errors, will the regulations system become better in the future. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i suppose, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97929606625 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67043347246 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498964803313 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.66078854 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5769230769 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34615384615 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237311232046 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635473687773 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595041403787 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151827976329 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690344003918 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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