Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It’s hard to deny that nowadays young people are expected to abide more strict rules than older generation do when they were young, and such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that the society are restricting young people too strictly. However, this statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies and it should be examined meticulously. As far as civilization, social relationship and are concerned, I strongly hold that young people are not following the regulations which are too strict.
First and foremost, it is a must that individual should follow rigorous rules as our civilization evolves. To be specific, only if all citizens obey rules and be self-disciplined can the whole society become harmony. Dating back to ancient times, there was no restriction and no morality, which make it possible for our ancestors to cut one another's throat. However, with the development of social civilization, laws have been established and social rules have become crucial. In recent days, young people respect everyone regardless of their genders, races or countries, thus making a much more civilized community.
Furthermore, the fact that people who obey rules strictly are more likely to have a better social relationship with others also indicates the importance of following high-standard rules. Take the case of myself, an ordinary freshman in Tsinghua University, I find that my peers in the campus all obey strict social rules such as listening to others carefully during group discussion, and as a result, the ambience of class is excellent. What’s more, I even gain my first internship offer by helping a pregnant lady, who is the chief officer of a well-known company, in the train station. Had it not been my highly self-restricted morality, I would never acquire such a great opportunity.
Nevertheless, a voice may arises that establishing rigid regulations might kill the creativity of younger people. Ironically, people get more innovative and ambitious if everyone in the society follow strict rules because a more equal environment can be constructed. Without the worry of being cheated or being misled, people get more confident to put their dreams in to reality. In one sense, a platform is created for citizens to show their talent and ambition, which strongly benefits the development of the society.
In a nutshell, I maintain that the rules that young people are expected to follow or obey are not too strict since it benefits many aspects of the society. Admittedly, just as my favorite saying goes, as long as the reason of man continues fallible, different opinions will be formed, and some people may oppose me. However, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2317.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21846846847 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92789587647 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0884372085 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.947368421 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2628382743 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779955443796 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873174088818 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152454291096 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656907852875 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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