Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past. While, many people believe that teachers were more respected and in the past, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of view, I think teachers are less appreciated in the modern era. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, students are less depended on their teachers in modern era, which reduce the teachers value in societies. In fact, students have a lot of technologies that help them to learn more efficiently than the past, and neither parents nor teachers do not have the same impact on children's learning. If a students can solve a mathematics problem with an online application, he doesn't spend time in extara classes. For example, when I was at high school, we do not have other platforms such as online classes, Youtube materials, and Telegram groups to get information abuot specific topics, but nowadays students can use the internet and online interactive programs to find more and up to date information, which was impossible fifteen years ago. As a result, students do not need to rely on teachers for learning, in turn, teachers gradually lose their value in the community.
Furthermore, nowadays parents are involving in the children's educaton because they are highly educated and carful about their children's future. Parents not only provide plenty of facilities for kids, but also they help them in their school work. Although parents cannot totally play the same role as teachers in education, they can indirectly reduce the importance of teachers in the society. To cast light on it, thirty years ago in my country, parents have limited knowledge and the small number of parents have the ability of writing and reading, so they appreciated and respected the teachers a lot. Actually, there was this notion amoung people that teaching is the best profession because they help people how to read and write. However, in our modern life we see that a lot of people have graduate degrees from well known universities. Therefore, they don't respect the knowledge of teachers who only have associate degree.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that teachers were more respected in the past. this is because students have a lot of other options to learn from them, and also their well educated parents help them in schoolwork.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00502512563 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64383220746 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517587939698 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9186949124 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219495897053 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757615155695 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544966563866 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140049327731 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515037694417 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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