Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
It is true that some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. I totally agree because it has more advantages rather than disadvantages for several reasons.
In the one hand, the advantage of having money is bringing truly support system in daily life. It is because most of activities today are using money as movement tools. For example, people can buy anything they want and they need. It is also for paying education fee and some home’s bills. At the result, people feel happy and their life will run well and better continuously in the future.
However, there are some negative effect by rely on money. Firstly, some people always reckon money as a goal or target, even as a God. It is because, they just have short-thinking about anything can be done by their money. For example, several employees always work hard to some job deadlines because their aims are earning much money. At the result, they will underestimate and disturb their leisure time. Secondly, having much money sometimes make humans so arrogant. It is because, they show up everything they can reach by using their money. For example, the rich-artist use their social media to share daily activity even when they buy branded stuff proudly. At the result, their follower could feel envy and jealous because they can’t be like that. So, money is not only bringing happiness but also social effect for the society.
From where I stand, I totally believe that, money as one of tool to contribute the happiness and daily activity. I suggest to control ourselves to use money as its logic benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the activities') or simply say ''most activities''.
Suggestion: most of the activities; most activities
...ort system in daily life. It is because most of activities today are using money as movement tools...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86231884058 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43638879044 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8675218166 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6315789474 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5263157895 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317956240798 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10361372501 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101467903614 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214594061003 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431800705355 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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