Book-10,test 2,task-1
the table below give information about sales of fairtrade-lebelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The table illustrates two different product's sales data of five European country in 1999 and 2004.The first table shows the the of fairtrade -lebelled coffee and second table shows the sale of fairtrade-lebelled banana . Both are showing in unit of euros.
Overall,the sale rose from 1999 to 2004 for both products.It clearly can be seen that,the sales of coffee in uk climed up significantly from 1.5 millions to 20 millions in 2004.While Sweden and Denmark have slight change of sales of about 0.2 million euros.Although Belgium is showing sale change of .7 millions euros.However,Switzerland jumped to double sale in 2004.
Now,its is understandable note that sales for banana in Switzerland rose more than twice form 15 to 47 million euros.However,it is noticeable fact that sales for both of country Sweden and Denmark faced slight declined in 2004 from 1999.while the sales of UK and Belgium gradually improving.
To sum up maximum county's sale have growth from 1994 to 2004 except for Sweden and Denmark for the fairtade-lebelled banana sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ws the sale of fairtrade-lebelled banana . Both are showing in unit of euros. Ove...
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...ose from 1999 to 2004 for both products.It clearly can be seen that,the sales of c...
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...oth products.It clearly can be seen that,the sales of coffee in uk climed up signifi...
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...rom 1.5 millions to 20 millions in 2004.While Sweden and Denmark have slight change o...
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...nge of sales of about 0.2 million euros.Although Belgium is showing sale change of .7 mi...
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...nge of sales of about 0.2 million euros.Although Belgium is showing sale change of .7 mi...
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...howing sale change of .7 millions euros.However,Switzerland jumped to double sale in 20...
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...sale change of .7 millions euros.However,Switzerland jumped to double sale in 2004. Now,its...
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...land jumped to double sale in 2004. Now,its is understandable note that sales for b...
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Suggestion: However
... than twice form 15 to 47 million euros.However,it is noticeable fact that sales for bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, while, except for, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4053489372 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.465909948 43.030603864 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.8 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 5.23603664747 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293622411462 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166048436775 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142264426933 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194146687323 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106114233813 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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