In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
D you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that buying a home is essential than than renting one. A lien's share of society favours it, however the rest reverse it. The following paragraphs will elucidate my personal perspective.
I see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons. First and foremost, a permanent house means a life time saving for one's life. As a result, no money waste on renting a accommodation. Secondly , . owing a house shows the status of a person which is very beneficial to stablish any kind of business or family relationships. Consequently, for any business deal other people would guess his/her financial status.
Adding further, the rare most coherent factor which cannot be neglected is having own house means a relief of mental pressure of giving monthly rent and can organize thing as he/she wants. To substantiate it ,i would quote an instance that people would contribute money to some where the money of the rent which will bring happiness to them.
One the other hand , which is half full for some my appear half empty to other. So some critics go against the stated idea. The top notch concrete reason is ,they do not willing to invest money at once .Therefore they prefer to rent house. Needless to say that ,some people also cannot to afford to buy a house . Hence they live on some one else's apartment. As a result they do not support to owing own house as well.
All the above discussed lead to the conclusion that owing a house mean reached to one of the achievement's of life. However, its contrary can be overlooked or controlled. But having a persona house is far more important than wasting money for nothing .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72203389831 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58516064405 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623728813559 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4673942823 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3157894737 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193382887301 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529909752567 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359498152066 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103750502985 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163684140128 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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